Whale Song rewrite continues.
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#AddChar: Fern, Pose: instrument_holding
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#AddChar: Akai, Pose: instrument_holding
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VEZ: Okay, we're booked for the <i>Float the Vote Festival</i> at Erosion.
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VEZ: Okay, we're booked for the <i>Blow Your Own Hole Festival</i> at Erosion.
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FERN: Erosion? Is that the cave club? I'd love to ROCK a cave! (laughs)
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MICAH: I hate to endorse any pun, but yeah. The acoustics are perfect.
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FERN: And it's on the water so the whales can come to the show!
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SKYLER: And loud! Shows at Erosion can been heard across the whole city.
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SKYLER: That'd be the "Float" part of the Festival.
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FERN: Yes! I heard a whale choir practicing the other night. So beautiful!
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FERN: I only wish I knew what they were singing.
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VEZ: Voting rights for whales would be a significant step toward global equality.
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SKYLER: Vez can be your translator.
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MICAH: And whales make better choices than humans do. They should get to vote.
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FERN: VEZ, YOU SPEAK WHALEISH?!!!
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SKYLER: They will. No one is trying to stop it. So our song will be a sure hit!
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VEZ: A bit. I took lessons in school, but my intonation was always a little too pitched.
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MICAH: Every human's intonation is too pitched; we're not whales. It's just cool you understand the language.
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FERN: SO COOL!
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MICAH: Whales are smart. We should all listen to what they have to say.
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SKYLER: No one disagrees with that. So our song supporting whale voices will be a sure hit!
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Vez bristles...
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+ (SLIDE)... but says nothing and lets Skyler's comment slide.
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+ ... and decides to put Skyler in her place.
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VEZ: Nothing's a sure thing, Skyler.
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+ [PLAY STEM A]
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~ drums_whalesong = "Human"
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#PlayMusic: drums_whalesong_human
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AKAI: {&It's a "shore party" because humans make the rules!|Humans would like this beat best.}
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AKAI: {&It's a "shore party" because humans run the world.|Humans would like this beat best.}
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-> STEMS_DRUMS
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+ [PLAY STEM B]
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~ drums_whalesong = "Whaleish"
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#PlayMusic: drums_whalesong_whaleish
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AKAI: {&If Whales made the rules, I think they'd like these drums best.|I hope the whale vote changes things.}
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AKAI: {&If whales had a say, I think they'd like these drums best.|Sounds like whales shakin' things up!}
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-> STEMS_DRUMS
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+ [PREVIOUS CHARACTER]
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-> STEMS_BASS
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+ [PLAY STEM B] #Mood=
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~ guitar_whalesong = "Whaleish"
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#PlayMusic: guitar_whalesong_whaleish
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SKYLER: {&A whaley riff says I care about the message more than myself.|This riff isn't as exciting as the solo.|Whaley riff over solo will prove to Vez I've changed.}
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SKYLER: {&This riff isn't as exciting as the solo.|Whaley riff over solo will prove to Vez I've changed.|A whaley riff says I care about the message more than myself.}
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-> STEMS_GUITAR
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+ [PREVIOUS CHARACTER]
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-> STEMS_DRUMS
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+ [PLAY STEM B]
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~ keys_whalesong = "Whaleish"
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#PlayMusic: keys_whalesong_whaleish
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FERN: {&Synthesized whale sounds are so cool!|No such thing as too much whale!|THIS will Float the Vote!}
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FERN: {&Synthesized whale sounds are so cool!|No such thing as too much whale!|THIS will blow them out of the water! In the best way.}
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-> STEMS_KEYS
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+ [PREVIOUS CHARACTER]
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-> STEMS_VOCALS
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#AddChar: Akai, Pose: instrument_holding
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{ vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish":
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FERN: Vez! Are you singing WHALEISH?!
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FERN: Vez! Your Whaleish sounds AMAZING!!!
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VEZ: Yes, though I'm a bit rusty.
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FERN: It sounds AMAZING!!!
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VEZ: Thanks. Though the whales might roast my pronunciation.
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- else:
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MICAH: Not bad, everyone.
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SKYLER: {SLIDE:Like I said, surefire hit!|Yeah. Nobody phoned it in.}
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FERN: It's good, but... Vez? Did you sing a different part that sounded super whaley?
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FERN: It's good, but... Vez? Didn't I hear you singing some Whaleish lyrics?
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VEZ: Yeah, I was playing around with some Whaleish lyrics.
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FERN: You speak WHALEISH?! That's SO COOL!
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VEZ: Yeah, I was playing around, but I don't think my pronunciation was right.
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}
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SKYLER: It's risky. Most people can't understand Whaleish.
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+ MICAH: The whales will appreciate that you tried.
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SKYLER: (laughs) And everyone else will just think you're possessed!
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Everyone glares at Skyler.
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SKYLER: What? Nobody jokes about being possessed by a whale ghost anymore?
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MICAH: That was never a thing.
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FERN: I know you're being mean, Skyler, but you've actually given Vez a compliment!
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FERN: Vez's Whaleish is so good it sounds exactly like a whale!
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+ FERN: Maybe we can invite a whale to be a guest vocalist.
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VEZ: Oh really? You think we should have a token whale in our band?
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Awkward moment with Fern's idol! As per Mir's suggestion.
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//revise everything below too...
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SKYLER: But most people at the show won't understand Whaleish.
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AKAI: MAKE THEM LEARN!
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FERN: You were in school when it came out? What was it like to LIVE HISTORY?!
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MICAH: Woah, woah. "Bandocracy" is 67 years old. I meant I learned it in music class.
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//HJ: I'm splitting the difference, Miriam. Let's say the song is 67 years old - less than 100, but more than 50. But definitely not 150 for reasons I explained on the World page.
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MICAH: Woah, woah. "Bandocracy" is 50 years old. I meant I learned it in music class.
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FERN: Oh, right! Sorry.
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MICAH: All good. I'll probably forget about this anyway. Because old. SO old.
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Before writing your first song, you gotta book your first show!
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In the Bandocracy, concerts are put on for a cause, with bands performing songs about the cause.
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So, you need to know the cause before writing a song.
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- L0_song == "Whale Song":
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Poster of Show
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Details of Show - location (Erosion) and cause ("Blow Your Own Hole Festival")
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= CHOOSE_SHOW_L0
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#UI: playlist/shows_L0
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+ [SELECT "FLOAT THE VOTE" POSTER]
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+ [SELECT "BLOW YOUR OWN HOLE" POSTER]
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FLOAT THE VOTE FESTIVAL
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BLOW YOUR OWN HOLE FESTIVAL
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Venue - Erosion
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Cause - The whales' right to vote in Earth’s elections.
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Cause - Support whales having a voice in the Bandocracy!
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All funds raised go to the Naturals School of Linguistics “Whaleish as a Second Language” program.
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Sponsored by the Outlook Neighbourhood Association
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Sponsored by the Outlook Neighbourhood Association in collaboration with the Underwater Citizens.
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+ [START]
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