Merge branch 'main' of repo.bloomdigital.media:BloomDigital/Bandocracy-ink

Level1/OPENING.ink

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ BASSIST: That way, when it's all for nothing, it won't be our fault.
 
 GUITARIST: Damn. I think I know who the band's black hole will be!
 GUITARIST: But, yeah. I want us to stand for something. And be absolutely stupid huge.
-GUITARIST: So no one will ever mention the Politicats again. 
+GUITARIST: So no one will remember me from the Politicats. 
 
 KEYBOARDIST: YOU were in the Politicats?! They were my favourite band!
 KEYBOARDIST: I mean, until everyone found out they were posers. 
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ BASSIST: Weren't you in the Politicats, too, {name_singer}?
 
 SINGER: I was. But I left. While they were still {name_keyboardist}'s favourite band.
 
-KEYBOARDIST: I know. I just didn't want to gush and make things awkward with my first bandleader. 
+KEYBOARDIST: I knew that. I just didn't want to gush and make things awkward with my first bandleader. 
 
 GUITARIST: Just with the posers in the room.
 GUITARIST: Well, I have a second chance, here. I won't waste it.
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ DRUMMER: WOOO! AKAI ON DRUMS!
     DRUMMER: HE! He talked. 
 - 
 
-DRUMMER: MAKE SOME NOISE!!!!
+DRUMMER: MAKE SOME NOISE!
 #PlaySFX: Akai_drumsmash
 DRUMMER: Sorry. My "energetic drummer" personality program gets loose here and there.
 DRUMMER: Keep in mind that I hate it more than you will. 

Level1/PRACTICE_WHALESONG.ink

@@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ DRUMMER: Now you can write your parts. You'll need more time, of course.
         ~ vocals_whalesong = "Human"
         -> WHALESONG_JAM
     + [Choose Whaleish lyrics.]
-        ~ vocals_whalesong = "Whalish"
+        ~ vocals_whalesong = "Whaleish"
         -> WHALESONG_JAM
     
 = GUITAR_STEMS
@@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ DRUMMER: Now you can write your parts. You'll need more time, of course.
         ~ guitar_whalesong = "Human"
         -> WHALESONG_JAM
     + [Choose whaley guitar.]
-        ~ guitar_whalesong = "Whalish"
+        ~ guitar_whalesong = "Whaleish"
         -> WHALESONG_JAM
     
 = BASS_STEMS 
@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@ DRUMMER: Now you can write your parts. You'll need more time, of course.
         ~ bass_whalesong = "Human"
         -> WHALESONG_JAM
     + [Choose deep oceany bass.]
-        ~ bass_whalesong = "Whalish"
+        ~ bass_whalesong = "Whaleish"
         -> WHALESONG_JAM
     
 = KEYS_STEMS
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ DRUMMER: Now you can write your parts. You'll need more time, of course.
         ~ keys_whalesong = "Human"
         -> WHALESONG_JAM
     + [Choose whaley harmonics.]
-        ~ keys_whalesong = "Whalish"
+        ~ keys_whalesong = "Whaleish"
         -> WHALESONG_JAM
 
     

Level1/SONG_TOPICS_L1.ink

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ KEYBOARDIST: Hello, bandmates!
 GUITARIST: Love the energy, kid. Save a little for the stage. 
 GUITARIST: So, where is the stage, {name_singer}?  
 
-BASSIST: Yeah, is this a Fearless Leader situation and you book the gigs?
+BASSIST: Yeah, is this a Fearless Leader situation? You book the gigs?
 BASSIST: Oh, no. We don't have a manager, do we?
 
 SINGER: We manage together. We play what we want, where we want.