Merge branch 'main' of ssh://bloomtea.supersaturn.space:3001/BloomDigital/Bandocracy-ink

Removed practice (we hope) because it was out of date.

Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink

@@ -1,11 +1,13 @@
 === PERFORM_WHALESONG ===
 #Environment: Erosion_show
 
+//No idea how we're doing the art for this yet, whether the characters will be drawn into the environment or if we're making performing poses for them. 
+
 {vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish":
     ~ mood_guitarist--
     ~ mood_keyboardist++
     ~ song_stance_rebels++
-    ~ L0_song = "Whaleish Whale Song"
+    ~ L0_song = "Whale Song in Whaleish"
     -> WHALEISH_LYRICS
 - else:
     ~ mood_guitarist++
@@ -21,16 +23,16 @@
             -> STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES
 
 = HUMAN_LYRICS    
-#PlayerControlUntil: SongDone, JumpToPath: PERFORM_WHALESONG.STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES
-        + [Perform Whale Song with human-language lyrics]
+#PlayerControlUntil: SongDone, JumpToPath: PERFORM_WHALESONG.STAGE_CHATTER_HUMANS
+        + [Perform Whale Song with only human-language lyrics]
             -> STAGE_CHATTER_HUMANS
 
 = STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES 
-//NOTE: On-stage comments that are not voiced will seem weird after hearing the song performed. Discuss with team soon, because if we take these out, I need to know. Though Mir will probably suggest testing it. 
+//NOTE: Heather fears that on-stage comments that are not voiced will seem weird after hearing the song performed. Discuss with team soon, because if we take these out, I need to know. Though Mir will probably suggest testing it. 
 
 FERN: We love you, whales!
 
-VEZ: <i>(in Whaleish) Welcome to the Bandocracy!</i> #PlaySound: Whaleish_welcome
+VEZ: (in Whaleish) <i>Welcome to the Bandocracy!</i> #PlaySound: Whaleish_welcome
 
     -> POSTSHOW_WHALESONG
     

Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink

@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@ AKAI: I never said you were great. But the crowd did love it.
 Band talks about their performance and which fan communities showed up.
 
 {vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish":
-    -> WHALE_FANS
+    -> BAND_OF_REBELS
 - else:
-    -> HUMAN_FANS
+    -> BAND_OF_THE_PEOPLE
 }
 
-= WHALE_FANS
+= BAND_OF_REBELS
 If the song lyrics were in Whaleish, they gained fans from the Naturals community and the Water-Dwellers!
 
 For Level 0, band member (probably Fern) explains how they know this - they were invited to the Naturals and the Water-Dweller communities on Harmony!
@@ -38,6 +38,18 @@ KEYBOARDIST: Inspiring people is... so inspiring! I'm totally signing up for Wha
 
 Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world!
 
+    -> PROGRESS
+
+= BAND_OF_THE_PEOPLE
+If the song lyrics were in human language only, they gained fans from the All For All community! And criticism from the Naturals who think they should have included Whaleish lyrics.
+
+Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world!
+
+Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice.
+
+    -> PROGRESS
+    
+= PROGRESS
 SINGER: So, our first song is a hit?
 
 DRUMMER: It's more than that...
@@ -48,15 +60,6 @@ DRUMMER: There are calls to adopt it as an official anthem of inter-species demo
 }
 GUITAR: Yeah, I'd say that qualifies as "a hit."
 
-Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice.
-
-    -> RELATIONSHIP
-
-= HUMAN_FANS
-If the song lyrics were in human language only, they gained fans from the All For All community! And criticism from the Naturals who think they should have included Whaleish lyrics.
-
-Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world!
-
 Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice.
 
     -> RELATIONSHIP

MAIN_Bandocracy.ink

@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ LIST shows = WhaleSong, SmileCurrency, RobotFix, MoodTattoo
 
 // *** SONG VARIABLES ***
 
-VAR L0_song = "???" //"Whale Song" or "Whaleish Whale Song"
+VAR L0_song = "???" //"Whale Song" or "Whale Song in Whaleish"
 VAR L1_song = "???" //"Robot Needs Fixing" or "Robot Fix Yourself" or "Hug It Out" or "Emotional Filth"
 VAR L2_song = "???" //"Come Get a Mood Tattoo" or "Don't Get a Mood Tattoo" or one of the above
 VAR L3_song = "???" //"See You Never" or "Welcome Home"