diff --git a/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink b/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink
index ef173c7..da788c5 100644
--- a/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink	
+++ b/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink	
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ AKAI: I'm not programmed to pack up the gear, {IDEALISTS:either|by the way}.
 
 #RemChar: Akai
 
-Once the others finish packing up...
+Akai rolls out and the others finish packing up.
 
 MICAH: You need a ride, kid?
 
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ SKYLER: I've changed. I'm not the same shallow fame-seeker I was before.
 
 VEZ: Besides, you know the real issue was never your love of the spotlight.
 
-SKYLER: (sighs) I know, but I'm not like you. I don't know what "causes" to support!
+SKYLER: (sighs) I know, but I'm not like you. I don't know what "causes" to support.
 
 VEZ: It's not a right or wrong answer. Not really. 
 VEZ: But if you're in a band, you need to care about the world and what's happening in it, one way or the other. 
@@ -210,6 +210,7 @@ VEZ: But if you're in a band, you need to care about the world and what's happen
         -> TEST_SKYLER
         
 = TEST_SKYLER
+//HJ: I'm out of hours for this draft! So this section is still just paraphrased. Feel free to come up with a funny whale knowledge question.
 Vez asks a question that tests Skyler's knowledge about the whales' cause to be part of the Bandocracy.
 Skyler fails it. She just hasn't been paying attention. But she gets Vez's point and promises to start taking an interest in what's going on in the world. 
     -> ASK_VEZ
@@ -250,6 +251,6 @@ SKYLER: Great! Want to start by getting a drink or something? I know this place
     
 === REWARD_SCREEN ===
 
-We've not designed this yet. Keana has a rough mock up on Miro. I think that if we end each level at a Reward Screen, we should start the new day with a brief SCENE in the Practice Space, rather than dropping players into the PLAYLIST, which is what it looks like now on the Miro board. 
+We've not designed this yet. Keana has a rough mock up on Miro. I think that if we end each level on a Reward Screen, we should start the new day with a brief scene in the Practice Space, rather than dropping players straight into the PLAYLIST to choose the next show, which is what it looks like now on the Miro board. Anyhoo, I'll write that next.
 
     -> PRACTICE_L1
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/Level 1/PRACTICE_L1.ink b/Level 1/PRACTICE_L1.ink
index c7e9f75..45206fc 100644
--- a/Level 1/PRACTICE_L1.ink	
+++ b/Level 1/PRACTICE_L1.ink	
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 === PRACTICE_L1 ===
 #Environment: PracticeSpace 
 
-This is the next day. Perhaps a couple characters show up earlier? As they trickle in, tuning their instruments, notifications for DMs in Harmony pop up.
+This is the next level. Next day? Next week? TBD. Perhaps a couple characters show up earlier than others for practice? As they trickle in, tuning their instruments, notifications for DMs in Harmony pop up.
 
 ~ DM_micah_fern_L0 = true
 // ^This unlocks the beginning of the DM conversation between Micah and Fern.