From d4638f8aeceb07c1fbf008008426fefaa47af3d3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: MikeKiss Date: Wed, 19 Feb 2025 11:21:25 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Tiny tweaks. Variable errors caught - whalish/whaleish --- Level1/OPENING.ink | 6 +++--- Level1/PRACTICE_WHALESONG.ink | 8 ++++---- Level1/SONG_TOPICS_L1.ink | 2 +- 3 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/Level1/OPENING.ink b/Level1/OPENING.ink index 66acd23..5011e22 100644 --- a/Level1/OPENING.ink +++ b/Level1/OPENING.ink @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ BASSIST: That way, when it's all for nothing, it won't be our fault. GUITARIST: Damn. I think I know who the band's black hole will be! GUITARIST: But, yeah. I want us to stand for something. And be absolutely stupid huge. -GUITARIST: So no one will ever mention the Politicats again. +GUITARIST: So no one will remember me from the Politicats. KEYBOARDIST: YOU were in the Politicats?! They were my favourite band! KEYBOARDIST: I mean, until everyone found out they were posers. @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ BASSIST: Weren't you in the Politicats, too, {name_singer}? SINGER: I was. But I left. While they were still {name_keyboardist}'s favourite band. -KEYBOARDIST: I know. I just didn't want to gush and make things awkward with my first bandleader. +KEYBOARDIST: I knew that. I just didn't want to gush and make things awkward with my first bandleader. GUITARIST: Just with the posers in the room. GUITARIST: Well, I have a second chance, here. I won't waste it. @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ DRUMMER: WOOO! AKAI ON DRUMS! DRUMMER: HE! He talked. - -DRUMMER: MAKE SOME NOISE!!!! +DRUMMER: MAKE SOME NOISE! #PlaySFX: Akai_drumsmash DRUMMER: Sorry. My "energetic drummer" personality program gets loose here and there. DRUMMER: Keep in mind that I hate it more than you will. diff --git a/Level1/PRACTICE_WHALESONG.ink b/Level1/PRACTICE_WHALESONG.ink index 9e03a55..f6dc85e 100644 --- a/Level1/PRACTICE_WHALESONG.ink +++ b/Level1/PRACTICE_WHALESONG.ink @@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ DRUMMER: Now you can write your parts. You'll need more time, of course. ~ vocals_whalesong = "Human" -> WHALESONG_JAM + [Choose Whaleish lyrics.] - ~ vocals_whalesong = "Whalish" + ~ vocals_whalesong = "Whaleish" -> WHALESONG_JAM = GUITAR_STEMS @@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ DRUMMER: Now you can write your parts. You'll need more time, of course. ~ guitar_whalesong = "Human" -> WHALESONG_JAM + [Choose whaley guitar.] - ~ guitar_whalesong = "Whalish" + ~ guitar_whalesong = "Whaleish" -> WHALESONG_JAM = BASS_STEMS @@ -675,7 +675,7 @@ DRUMMER: Now you can write your parts. You'll need more time, of course. ~ bass_whalesong = "Human" -> WHALESONG_JAM + [Choose deep oceany bass.] - ~ bass_whalesong = "Whalish" + ~ bass_whalesong = "Whaleish" -> WHALESONG_JAM = KEYS_STEMS @@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ DRUMMER: Now you can write your parts. You'll need more time, of course. ~ keys_whalesong = "Human" -> WHALESONG_JAM + [Choose whaley harmonics.] - ~ keys_whalesong = "Whalish" + ~ keys_whalesong = "Whaleish" -> WHALESONG_JAM diff --git a/Level1/SONG_TOPICS_L1.ink b/Level1/SONG_TOPICS_L1.ink index b8fd20a..5a4d394 100644 --- a/Level1/SONG_TOPICS_L1.ink +++ b/Level1/SONG_TOPICS_L1.ink @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ KEYBOARDIST: Hello, bandmates! GUITARIST: Love the energy, kid. Save a little for the stage. GUITARIST: So, where is the stage, {name_singer}? -BASSIST: Yeah, is this a Fearless Leader situation and you book the gigs? +BASSIST: Yeah, is this a Fearless Leader situation? You book the gigs? BASSIST: Oh, no. We don't have a manager, do we? SINGER: We manage together. We play what we want, where we want.