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Heather Jackson 2025-02-18 13:03:18 -05:00
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@ -143,10 +143,9 @@ BASSIST: Hey. Any complaint means you hit a nerve. That's a win.
BASSIST: On the other hand, it's just one complaint. BASSIST: On the other hand, it's just one complaint.
BASSIST: I'd have made that song into an attack. An accusation. BASSIST: I'd have made that song into an attack. An accusation.
{ {vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish":
- vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish":
BASSIST: But you made people hear whales as equals. BASSIST: But you made people hear whales as equals.
- vocals_whalesong == "Human": - else:
BASSIST: But you made people want to listen. BASSIST: But you made people want to listen.
} }
BASSIST: I'm impressed. Hold your head up. BASSIST: I'm impressed. Hold your head up.
@ -178,7 +177,6 @@ DRUMMER: In case you want to use those hours.
SINGER: Like, to practice or write a song or something? Why not! SINGER: Like, to practice or write a song or something? Why not!
{name_bassist} heads off into a corner alone and {name_keyboardist} follows. {name_bassist} heads off into a corner alone and {name_keyboardist} follows.
//HJ: I think both 2-on-2 conversations taking place on screen together actually works well because Keys and Bassist's convo can be so much shorter, just a few lines inbetween Singer and Guitarist's confrontation.
#PlayFX: spotlight_right #PlayFX: spotlight_right
//NOTE: ^^This is another command I just pulled out of my butt. When Art is ready, we'll talk about how we're going to achieve this, but for now I'm picturing Singer and Guitarist standing to the right with the spotlight on them, while Bassist and Keys are over to the left. //NOTE: ^^This is another command I just pulled out of my butt. When Art is ready, we'll talk about how we're going to achieve this, but for now I'm picturing Singer and Guitarist standing to the right with the spotlight on them, while Bassist and Keys are over to the left.
@ -199,7 +197,6 @@ SINGER: I can tell that you're trying. But people who've changed don't just say,
-> CONVO_KEYS_BASSIST -> CONVO_KEYS_BASSIST
= CONVO_SINGER_GUITAR_EGO = CONVO_SINGER_GUITAR_EGO
Singer accuses Guitar of being in band for themself alone, playing songs they don't believe in, just like in their last band, the Politicats. Guitar hasn't changed at all! //MK: not sure about this angle - playing songs they don't believe in again. Does Singer not want G to play? So, I tried this -
SINGER: You still don't believe in what we're playing. SINGER: You still don't believe in what we're playing.
SINGER: But you used to be better at faking it. SINGER: But you used to be better at faking it.
@ -233,6 +230,7 @@ SINGER: You have to believe in what we do, even when you don't stand out.
GUITARIST: Hey, I don't know what I believe in, alright! I'm still looking. GUITARIST: Hey, I don't know what I believe in, alright! I'm still looking.
GUITARIST: And no one can believe in "everything", you know?! GUITARIST: And no one can believe in "everything", you know?!
//HJ: Agreed on the mom stuff. She should come up here, especially if Guitarist was a jerk. VARS => (arc_guitarist == "egocentric") && (vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish")
SINGER: Yeah. Yeah, you're right. SINGER: Yeah. Yeah, you're right.
GUITARIST: But I want to be a better bandmate. And a better friend. GUITARIST: But I want to be a better bandmate. And a better friend.