Band Vision & Band Stance variables renamed to reflect narrative changes.

Revised PLAYLIST to remove confusing story. Less words!

Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink

@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@
 {vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish":
     ~ mood_guitarist--
     ~ mood_keyboardist++
-    ~ song_stance_rebels++
+    ~ song_stance_iconoclasts++
     ~ L0_song = "Whale Song in Whaleish"
     -> WHALEISH_LYRICS
 - else:
     ~ mood_guitarist++
     ~ mood_keyboardist--
-    ~ song_stance_people++
+    ~ song_stance_idealists++
     ~ L0_song = "Whale Song"
     -> HUMAN_LYRICS
 }

MAIN_Bandocracy.ink

@@ -39,21 +39,21 @@ VAR L0_drinks = false
 // *** BAND VARIABLES ***
 
 VAR band_name = ""
-VAR song_stance_rebels = 0
-VAR song_stance_people = 0
+VAR song_stance_idealists = 0
+VAR song_stance_iconoclasts = 0
 VAR song_stance_average = 0 
     /* Set song_stance_average in script like this:
-        ~ song_stance_average = song_stance_rebels + song_stance_people
+        ~ song_stance_average = song_stance_idealists + song_stance_iconoclasts
     */
-VAR band_vision = "" // "Band of the People", "Band of Rebels", "Band of Flip-Flop"
+VAR band_vision = "" // "Idealists", "Iconoclasts", "Middling"
     /* Set band_vision by checking the song_stance_average:
         {
         - song_stance_average == 0:
-            ~ band_vision = "Band of Flip-Flop"
+            ~ band_vision = "Middling"
         - song_stance_average > 0:
-            ~ band_vision = "Band of the People"
+            ~ band_vision = "Idealists"
         - song_stance_average < 0:
-            ~ band_vision = "Band of Rebels"
+            ~ band_vision = "Iconoclasts"
         }
             
     */

OPENING.ink

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ FERN: Oh, right! Sorry.
 MICAH: All good. I'll probably forget about this anyway. Because old. SO old. 
 
 FERN: (laughs) 
-FERN: But, do you think the Poli-sci Punks knew their song would change the world? 
+FERN: But, do you think the PolSci Punks knew their song would change the world? 
 
     + SKYLER: When you're THAT good? Yes!
     

PLAYLIST.ink

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 - (SONGS) //I made these labels instead of stitches because they can all appear at once, rather than one after the other.
 
     + [BANDOCRACY ANTHEM] //I had the idea that we could put this here, so the band's Playlist app isn't blank. Plus players could listen to this song too.Also this could replay the opening video if we wanted it to. 
-        The Poli-sci Punks' hit song "Bandocracy" inspired a whole new way of running the world!
+        The PolSci Punks' hit song "Bandocracy" inspired a whole new way of governing the world!
         ++ [CLICK DIFFERENT SONG] 
             -> SONGS
         ++ [MUSIC PLAYER]
@@ -13,19 +13,17 @@
     + {OPENING}[{L0_song}]
         {
         - L0_song == "???":
-        Before writing your first song, you must book your first show! 
-        Skyler and the Politicats learned this the hard way when they performed "Robotic Reincarnation" at the <i>Vertical Veggies Festival</i>. The crowd pelted them with tomatoes until they fled the stage!
-        Mismatched messages are NOT how musicians gain fans and influence.
-        // bigger design chat that we should have today, if we make this the stakes that mismatched messages & venues lose fans and clout than we have to give them the office to pick the wrong venue for the song. We can discuss this, and I know it adds to your workload, but I think it will improve the design enormously.
+        Before writing your first song, you gotta book your first show! 
+        In the Bandocracy, concerts are put on for a cause, with bands performing songs about the cause. 
+        So, you need to know the cause before writing a song.
         
-        // I think we should just leave the word politicians out of the game. just musicians because in this version of the world politicians haven't existed in over 100 years. 
         - L0_song == "Whale Song":
         Poster of Show
-        Details of Show - location (Erosion) and cause ("Float the Vote")
+        Details of Show - location (Erosion) and cause ("Blow Your Own Hole Festival")
         Your Show stats - Whale Song played, community joined
         - L0_song == "Whaleish Whale Song":
         Poster of Show
-        Details of Show - location (Erosion) and cause ("Float the Vote")
+        Details of Show - location (Erosion) and cause ("Blow Your Own Hole Festival")
         Your Show stats - Whale Song played, community joined
         }
         ++ [CLICK DIFFERENT SONG]