miriam's notes: Made some suggestions for edits to the opening, playlist and practice scenes.
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@ -66,6 +66,7 @@ AKAI: Now come up with your parts. You'll need more time, of course.
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//not sure how we'll play the music in this scene. Individually play default stems? Or randomized?
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//Click on a character or click the FINISH button.
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// i think this is going to need some tweaking from the dev, but I assume this is the part that we'd need to go and reprogram anyways to make it work in single player only. Also I think this + the end jam commands need some audio / ux smoothing so it actually sounds like a band starting and stopping a jam .
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+ [DRUMS]
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-> STEMS_DRUMS
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@ -94,6 +95,8 @@ AKAI: Now come up with your parts. You'll need more time, of course.
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#PlayMusic: drums_whalesong_whaleish
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AKAI: {&If Whales made the rules, I think they'd like these drums best.|I hope the whale vote changes things.}
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-> STEMS_DRUMS
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// also I just realized in the current version of the game, Akai is not a clickable character who has ideas or thoughts about each stem, so we may have to design a different UX for choose the drums, the band would choose and Akai would have no say, also I am not sure if he should be a clickable character with interior dialogue.
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+ [PREVIOUS CHARACTER]
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-> STEMS_BASS
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+ [NEXT CHARACTER]
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@ -233,16 +236,16 @@ SKYLER argues for NO Whaleish because people might think it's a gimmick.
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SINGER: You don't think I can do it?
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GUITARIST: Hey, if anyone can do it, it's you. But people might call it a gimmick.
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SKYLER: Hey, if anyone can do it, it's you. But people might call it a gimmick.
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KEYS advocates for Whaleish lyrics - they'd make a SPLASH!
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/// KEYS advocates for Whaleish lyrics - they'd make a SPLASH! - not sure if you meant to have this duplication
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FERN: Sing it in Whale! That would make such a SPLASH! Haha!
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BASSIST: I hope that's the last pun we get from Fern. I almost laughed. #THOUGHT
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MICAH: I hope that's the last pun we get from Fern. I almost laughed. #THOUGHT
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GUITARIST: Yeah. That, too. Whaleish might confuse them.
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SKYLER: Yeah. That, too. Whaleish might confuse them.
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SINGER: So, are we changing the song? Or going with what we've got?
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VEZ: So, are we changing the song? Or going with what we've got?
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Should we change the song?
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16
OPENING.ink
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OPENING.ink
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@ -33,11 +33,19 @@ OH! Can the opening video be rewatchable from somewhere? Maybe in the playlist?
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VEZ: Wow. That's the best first jam session I've ever heard.
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// Mir: Suggestion here Vez says: "Bandocracy, An oldie but a goodie." Could be considered subtle shade at the past relationship with Skyler as well as the song. Also tags the idea that the name of the game is the title of the song that started it all.
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+ SKYLER: You're welcome!
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//Mir: SKYLE: Are you talking about me or the song?
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// VEZ: Can it be both??
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// cut the head shake
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VEZ just shakes their head. They've heard that one before.
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+ FERN: Me too!
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//mir suggest FERN: Wow. That's the best first jam session I've played!
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// put the complimentary semi naive voice in the person who it fits best!
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VEZ: Isn't this your very first band?
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@ -50,7 +58,7 @@ MICAH: I haven't played that song since I was in school.
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FERN: You were in school when it came out? What was it like?
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MICAH: Woah, woah. "Bandocracy" is fifty years old. I meant I learned it in music class.
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//mir i think in my headcanon bandocracy is 150 years old because it started the whole movement. It would have the same status as le marseillaise https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/La_Marseillaise
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FERN: Oh, right! Sorry.
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MICAH: All good. I'll probably forget about this anyway. Because old. SO old.
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FERN: What's he-- OH! <i>Skyler and the Politicats</i>, my favourite band!
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FERN: I mean, until everyone found out you were posers.
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SKYLER: I may have fallen, but at least I'm not <i>burnt out</i> like Micah!
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SKYLER: I may have fallen, but at least I'm not a <i>burn out</i> like Micah!
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VEZ: Can we NOT break up the band before we even pick a name?
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@ -160,7 +168,7 @@ AKAI: Sorry. My "energetic drummer" personality program can be a bit loud.
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#PlaySFX: Akai_angry
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//like one of R2D2's angry squawks? Something to indicate his emotion. Could be useful.
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AKAI: Know that I hate it more than you will.
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/// HA HA HA
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FERN: You don't like your own personality?
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AKAI: It isn't my personality. It's the one a human dev decided I should have.
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VEZ: No, we manage together. We play what we want, where we want.
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VEZ: Well... where we can. And what, ideally, reflects a local zeitgeist--
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// i am not sure people will know what a zeitgeist is. Maybe either a joke to explain, or an easier word.
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#PlaySFX: akai_interrupt
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//MK: ^^cymbal crash or something.
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AKAI: LET'S WRECK SHIT!
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- (SONGS) //I made these labels instead of stitches because they can all appear at once, rather than one after the other.
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+ [BANDOCRACY ANTHEM] //I had the idea that we could put this here, so the band's Playlist app isn't blank. Plus players could listen to this song too.
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+ [BANDOCRACY ANTHEM] //I had the idea that we could put this here, so the band's Playlist app isn't blank. Plus players could listen to this song too.Also this could replay the opening video if we wanted it to.
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The Poli-sci Punks' hit song "Bandocracy" inspired a whole new way of running the world!
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++ [CLICK DIFFERENT SONG]
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-> SONGS
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{
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- L0_song == "???":
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Before writing your first song, you must book your first show!
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Skyler and the Politicats learned this the hard way when they performed "Robotic Reincarntion" at the <i>Vertical Veggies Festival</i>. The crowd pelted them with tomatoes until they fled the stage!
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Mismatched messages are NOT how musician-politicians gain fans and influence.
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Skyler and the Politicats learned this the hard way when they performed "Robotic Reincarnation" at the <i>Vertical Veggies Festival</i>. The crowd pelted them with tomatoes until they fled the stage!
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Mismatched messages are NOT how musicians gain fans and influence.
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// bigger design chat that we should have today, if we make this the stakes that mismatched messages & venues lose fans and clout than we have to give them the office to pick the wrong venue for the song. We can discuss this, and I know it adds to your workload, but I think it will improve the design enormously.
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// I think we should just leave the word politicians out of the game. just musicians because in this version of the world politicians haven't existed in over 100 years.
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- L0_song == "Whale Song":
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Poster of Show
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Details of Show - location (Erosion) and cause ("Float the Vote")
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