From 366773b3f2cb7325a59667de331bd51721b4ad4e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Heather Jackson Date: Fri, 20 Mar 2026 10:41:35 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Tiny tweaks --- Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink | 12 +++++++----- Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink | 27 +++++++++++++++------------ MAIN_Bandocracy.ink | 2 +- 3 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink b/Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink index d364d1f..03c81ab 100644 --- a/Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink +++ b/Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink @@ -1,11 +1,13 @@ === PERFORM_WHALESONG === #Environment: Erosion_show +//No idea how we're doing the art for this yet, whether the characters will be drawn into the environment or if we're making performing poses for them. + {vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish": ~ mood_guitarist-- ~ mood_keyboardist++ ~ song_stance_rebels++ - ~ L0_song = "Whaleish Whale Song" + ~ L0_song = "Whale Song in Whaleish" -> WHALEISH_LYRICS - else: ~ mood_guitarist++ @@ -21,16 +23,16 @@ -> STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES = HUMAN_LYRICS -#PlayerControlUntil: SongDone, JumpToPath: PERFORM_WHALESONG.STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES - + [Perform Whale Song with human-language lyrics] +#PlayerControlUntil: SongDone, JumpToPath: PERFORM_WHALESONG.STAGE_CHATTER_HUMANS + + [Perform Whale Song with only human-language lyrics] -> STAGE_CHATTER_HUMANS = STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES -//NOTE: On-stage comments that are not voiced will seem weird after hearing the song performed. Discuss with team soon, because if we take these out, I need to know. Though Mir will probably suggest testing it. +//NOTE: Heather fears that on-stage comments that are not voiced will seem weird after hearing the song performed. Discuss with team soon, because if we take these out, I need to know. Though Mir will probably suggest testing it. FERN: We love you, whales! -VEZ: (in Whaleish) Welcome to the Bandocracy! #PlaySound: Whaleish_welcome +VEZ: (in Whaleish) Welcome to the Bandocracy! #PlaySound: Whaleish_welcome -> POSTSHOW_WHALESONG diff --git a/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink b/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink index 360e4b9..043ecd6 100644 --- a/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink +++ b/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink @@ -16,12 +16,12 @@ AKAI: I never said you were great. But the crowd did love it. Band talks about their performance and which fan communities showed up. {vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish": - -> WHALE_FANS + -> BAND_OF_REBELS - else: - -> HUMAN_FANS + -> BAND_OF_THE_PEOPLE } -= WHALE_FANS += BAND_OF_REBELS If the song lyrics were in Whaleish, they gained fans from the Naturals community and the Water-Dwellers! For Level 0, band member (probably Fern) explains how they know this - they were invited to the Naturals and the Water-Dweller communities on Harmony! @@ -38,6 +38,18 @@ KEYBOARDIST: Inspiring people is... so inspiring! I'm totally signing up for Wha Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world! + -> PROGRESS + += BAND_OF_THE_PEOPLE +If the song lyrics were in human language only, they gained fans from the All For All community! And criticism from the Naturals who think they should have included Whaleish lyrics. + +Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world! + +Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice. + + -> PROGRESS + += PROGRESS SINGER: So, our first song is a hit? DRUMMER: It's more than that... @@ -48,15 +60,6 @@ DRUMMER: There are calls to adopt it as an official anthem of inter-species demo } GUITAR: Yeah, I'd say that qualifies as "a hit." -Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice. - - -> RELATIONSHIP - -= HUMAN_FANS -If the song lyrics were in human language only, they gained fans from the All For All community! And criticism from the Naturals who think they should have included Whaleish lyrics. - -Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world! - Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice. -> RELATIONSHIP diff --git a/MAIN_Bandocracy.ink b/MAIN_Bandocracy.ink index fbcb18b..3605388 100644 --- a/MAIN_Bandocracy.ink +++ b/MAIN_Bandocracy.ink @@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ LIST shows = WhaleSong, SmileCurrency, RobotFix, MoodTattoo // *** SONG VARIABLES *** -VAR L0_song = "???" //"Whale Song" or "Whaleish Whale Song" +VAR L0_song = "???" //"Whale Song" or "Whale Song in Whaleish" VAR L1_song = "???" //"Robot Needs Fixing" or "Robot Fix Yourself" or "Hug It Out" or "Emotional Filth" VAR L2_song = "???" //"Come Get a Mood Tattoo" or "Don't Get a Mood Tattoo" or one of the above VAR L3_song = "???" //"See You Never" or "Welcome Home"