diff --git a/Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink b/Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink
index d364d1f..03c81ab 100644
--- a/Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink
+++ b/Level 0/PERFORM_WHALESONG.ink
@@ -1,11 +1,13 @@
=== PERFORM_WHALESONG ===
#Environment: Erosion_show
+//No idea how we're doing the art for this yet, whether the characters will be drawn into the environment or if we're making performing poses for them.
+
{vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish":
~ mood_guitarist--
~ mood_keyboardist++
~ song_stance_rebels++
- ~ L0_song = "Whaleish Whale Song"
+ ~ L0_song = "Whale Song in Whaleish"
-> WHALEISH_LYRICS
- else:
~ mood_guitarist++
@@ -21,16 +23,16 @@
-> STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES
= HUMAN_LYRICS
-#PlayerControlUntil: SongDone, JumpToPath: PERFORM_WHALESONG.STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES
- + [Perform Whale Song with human-language lyrics]
+#PlayerControlUntil: SongDone, JumpToPath: PERFORM_WHALESONG.STAGE_CHATTER_HUMANS
+ + [Perform Whale Song with only human-language lyrics]
-> STAGE_CHATTER_HUMANS
= STAGE_CHATTER_WHALES
-//NOTE: On-stage comments that are not voiced will seem weird after hearing the song performed. Discuss with team soon, because if we take these out, I need to know. Though Mir will probably suggest testing it.
+//NOTE: Heather fears that on-stage comments that are not voiced will seem weird after hearing the song performed. Discuss with team soon, because if we take these out, I need to know. Though Mir will probably suggest testing it.
FERN: We love you, whales!
-VEZ: (in Whaleish) Welcome to the Bandocracy! #PlaySound: Whaleish_welcome
+VEZ: (in Whaleish) Welcome to the Bandocracy! #PlaySound: Whaleish_welcome
-> POSTSHOW_WHALESONG
diff --git a/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink b/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink
index 360e4b9..043ecd6 100644
--- a/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink
+++ b/Level 0/POSTSHOW_WHALESONG.ink
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@ AKAI: I never said you were great. But the crowd did love it.
Band talks about their performance and which fan communities showed up.
{vocals_whalesong == "Whaleish":
- -> WHALE_FANS
+ -> BAND_OF_REBELS
- else:
- -> HUMAN_FANS
+ -> BAND_OF_THE_PEOPLE
}
-= WHALE_FANS
+= BAND_OF_REBELS
If the song lyrics were in Whaleish, they gained fans from the Naturals community and the Water-Dwellers!
For Level 0, band member (probably Fern) explains how they know this - they were invited to the Naturals and the Water-Dweller communities on Harmony!
@@ -38,6 +38,18 @@ KEYBOARDIST: Inspiring people is... so inspiring! I'm totally signing up for Wha
Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world!
+ -> PROGRESS
+
+= BAND_OF_THE_PEOPLE
+If the song lyrics were in human language only, they gained fans from the All For All community! And criticism from the Naturals who think they should have included Whaleish lyrics.
+
+Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world!
+
+Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice.
+
+ -> PROGRESS
+
+= PROGRESS
SINGER: So, our first song is a hit?
DRUMMER: It's more than that...
@@ -48,15 +60,6 @@ DRUMMER: There are calls to adopt it as an official anthem of inter-species demo
}
GUITAR: Yeah, I'd say that qualifies as "a hit."
-Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice.
-
- -> RELATIONSHIP
-
-= HUMAN_FANS
-If the song lyrics were in human language only, they gained fans from the All For All community! And criticism from the Naturals who think they should have included Whaleish lyrics.
-
-Plus, they've already heard rumours about how their song is already affecting the world!
-
Sets up context (based on world outcome band stance) for the next Song Choice.
-> RELATIONSHIP
diff --git a/MAIN_Bandocracy.ink b/MAIN_Bandocracy.ink
index fbcb18b..3605388 100644
--- a/MAIN_Bandocracy.ink
+++ b/MAIN_Bandocracy.ink
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ LIST shows = WhaleSong, SmileCurrency, RobotFix, MoodTattoo
// *** SONG VARIABLES ***
-VAR L0_song = "???" //"Whale Song" or "Whaleish Whale Song"
+VAR L0_song = "???" //"Whale Song" or "Whale Song in Whaleish"
VAR L1_song = "???" //"Robot Needs Fixing" or "Robot Fix Yourself" or "Hug It Out" or "Emotional Filth"
VAR L2_song = "???" //"Come Get a Mood Tattoo" or "Don't Get a Mood Tattoo" or one of the above
VAR L3_song = "???" //"See You Never" or "Welcome Home"